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I took this near Pacific City, OR while driving up the coast. The weather kept going from hard rain to slight sun every 15 min or so. I had to wipe off my lens more than a few times...

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:icontimothy-sim:
I'm impressed at the vision you had to stop by this place even when the elements seemed against you to get this shot. It was really a shot that paid off as it looked great fulfilling the rule of thirds and creating that aesthetically pleasing look.

It does work to your advantage that the blends of the multiple exposures made this picture an overall pleasing shot, something not easily done during an overcast and drizzling sky.

To perhaps make this picture better, I felt that the bottom most portion should be cropped just a little to remove the sudden darkness that crept up.

You could also run this piece through a photoshop photo-filter to either warm-up or add a different hue for a little more dramatic effect of the picture.

Try sharpening just a tad more and push the levels closer in a little for a nicer contrasted feel and I think this piece might even be a piece that anyone would want to put as their desktop wallpaper!
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:iconlive-breath-try:
Breath taking shot!...I am going to cry :(.
:iconjordanjellybean:
it's dramatic, I love it! :D

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Live as if you'll die today.
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Thanks!

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:iconaustinboothphoto:
I really like the ominous stormy feel to this one. It gives you a feel for what the Oregon coast is really like most of the time.
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Very true. I seem to have bad luck with the weather every time I visit the coast. Never sunny, or even not rainy.

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:iconaustinboothphoto:
Me too for the most part. I can't remember any sunny days on the Oregon coast except a brief period this Sunday and one weekend where I was extremely lucky and got two of my best photos including the one I got a daily deviation. Other than thats its pretty much been rain, rain, clouds and more rain.
:iconniel4:
I really like this one. I keep coming back to it. I like the wave splashing on the right rock... did you wait for that moment or was it coincidence?

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That was actually planed. I waited for a good wave, and really like how it turned out.

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